Problems we needed to improve and how we overcame them.

Our negative feedback was-

Lack of camera angles- We only really had 4 different camera shots, one of the police officer entering the interregation room, one over the shoulder shot from barneys view, one over the shoulder shot from mr goulds view then one close up shot of barneys face. We realised that it would of been so much of an improvement if we maybe added point of view shots of the photographs of victims and a cctv high angle shot of the room.

Framing- We realised last minute that we could of cropped down the shot to focus more on the actors then the surroundings as we had shelves sticking out alot of the plain wall which we did not need.

Cutting- When we watched the clip in front of the class we realised alot of errors with the cutting as some parts did not flow nicely. This is something we definetly need to make sure is improved on for next time.

Costume on Barney- Some of the feedback was commenting on how Barney had alot of coloured wristbands that did not look right for his part of a murderer.

No flashback- Orignally, the plot was that Barney had a flashback of getting bullied when there is a close up of his face, but we did not have time to fit this in. It would have made it so much exciting but it still worked well.

So, next time we are going to ensure that all camera angles are used and we make more accurate cutting for the main task.