The Main task Final Idea

Our idea for our main task is that theres this guy who used to get badly bullied when he was at school and in his younger years. He grew up an ordinary man with a house and wife.
But our clip starts by him coming back from work and going into his house and checking if his wifes home, he then puts his briefcase down and head towards the garden where there is a secluded small shed. He then picks up a key which is hidden underneath a slab/brick and enters the shed. Once he enters the shed, the camera would pan around the room where there is loads of newspaper cuttings of murders from the local newspapers around the wall and pictures of girls and boys and maps and locations of places. He then goes into this draw and picks out a yearbook. This yearbook is his old yearbook he had in 1992. The camera then goes onto an over the shoulder shot of the man flicking through the yearbook and there would be all the pictures of the kids in his old school. Some had red circles and crosses over their faces. The red circles would mean that he is going to kill them and that their next and the crosses would mean he had already killed them. So, when he is flicking through the yearbook, the camera focuses on a specific person with a red circle already around their face then there would be a 3 or4 second flash back of him in the past killing them and then it would flash back to the future and you see him crossing out their face. This then repeats two times (with obviously two different murders). It then ends by the camera focusing on a girls face without a circle or cross and then it goes onto a scene of the woman who was the girl in the yearbook doing something and acting innocent but the audience knows that she's next. It then goes onto the murderers hand circling the girls face with red marker pen.